Gentle Kisses

A haiku for Spring

Loden rose petals
Blush with the first fervent kiss,
Of the warm Spring breeze.

Author's Note

Loden is a waterproof woolen cloth...I made reference to the texture of the petals to the cloth.

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Great write because if the breeze is not too strong the rose stands its ground..Very descriptive and expressive. Sunflower

[SoulofManyFaces]

Short, delicate, has a soft, sensual feel as well.
Good write!

[JenLyn]

Good write. :)