She is

New world

She thinks she's not good
She knows she's not smart
She said "I have lot of flaws"
She already she was never pretty

She's got boring life
But she is willing to change it
Because that is not what she want
For her dreams, she is exploring herself

So here I am
Found myself into writing
To release my feelings
And to expand my knowledge

-r

Reviews

[Zaliodir]

Kumusta po. ;) Ko talagang nagustuhan ang iyong tula. Sumasang-ayon ako sa iba pang mga reviewer, tungkol sa kanyang mga puna sa ang daloy ng tula. Salamat sa iyo para sa pagbabahagi!

[H.L. Cerveise]

Welcome blackandwhite. I liked your poem. Your reason for being here is like so many of us. I really like its flow; however, the flow could be made a little better like this:

She thinks she's not good.
She knows she's not smart.
She said, "I have a lot of flaws"
She already knows she was never pretty.

She has a boring life.
However, she is willing to change it,
Because that is not what she wants.
For her dreams, she is exploring herself.

So here I find myself.
I found myself in writing,
It releases my feelings.

Feel free to totally ignore me or use any part of what I changed. It is totally up to you.

Well done.