Biography of a Hopeless Lover

 

Let me tell you about my self –

according to statistics I am nothing without you.

 

I’m a speck - a miniscule dot on the radar, beeping incessantly in your ear.

I am the alien transplant that you were violated for.

 

I am the probe the inside, the suspect, the investigator.

 

I am the self-destructing parasite that hates to love you

but loves to f**k you.

 

I am the inside of your outside.

I am the thought that crosses your c**k, at least once as day.

 

 

 

And what of you?

 

 

Well, I could tell you about you how you are a brain biting bit of matter

causing my common sense to implode on itself.

 

It’s still there just scatter between my libido and a replay of another nights festivities.

 

 

According to statistics I am nothing;

Not friend nor foe.

Not fish nor fowl.

 

I am not just another in the sea.

And while I may run around like a fool my head is always firmly attached.

 

 

 

But what’s your excuse?

Reviews

[Cassie Meno]

wow.
Not going to lie I would hate to be the subject of this poem.
I absolutely loved it.
It's not exactly comedic, but it has a bit of humor worked in there.
I like the structure too
very unique, it makes it seem original, not that the work itself isn't.
I love how it works science in there too.
Keep up the good work!

I think this is good. I liked the sturcture. The pauses in between made me stop and reflect on what I had just read. Good work!