Fingers Crossed

Fingers Crossed

A Poem by matelotrod
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Just a small thank you message.

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                    Fingers Crossed !
What it is to have good friends, this is where my loneliness ends
Two lovely ladies became my guide I will treat them both with pride
I was suffering a load of self pity then my moaning was restored by Kitty
She told me how to put things right with help from a friend named "Light"

I tried and tried to join Writers Cafe and it wasn't easy I have to say
I had almost given up tryng to Login no-one was telling me where to begin
It was really becoming a pain to be told "Login Error" please try again.
I succeeded now all is allright so I am raising my glass to Kitty and Light

Here's to a future I hope it is nice, better than WN who let us down twice
I can now settle down and no longer curse and post all of my moaning in verse
I realise that I often become agitated but it cannot be helped  it's all age-related
I'll make a promise before this poem ends I will review all the work of my friends


Rod Broomham (c)

© 2017 matelotrod


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It's funny how sometimes all You need is a little tiny thing to caress You inside and let all out, Your poem gifted me this, and what have been locked inside me for two days was released with tears... maybe I'm too lonely more than I've noticed my self to be, it's also funny how words were rolling in my head with something about (odd to writers network) and its members, each member there added her/his own special touch... it was for me more like a home... I don't feel this here, sometimes I think of just taking a break and go... but with my old friends here, it gives me a reason to stay... I even considered writing You a small poem if You didn't join in as an alternative plan :)

All the credits go to wonderful Kitty, I didn't even do anything, nor even helped Your with Your problems here, You've beaten the devil alone :)
I know she is now supper happy seeing You here, considering You the good and wonderful friend.

Thank You for this beautiful piece, it touched me so tenderly, I know Kitty will appreciate it as deeply as I do✨

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Bravo for seeing it through ~ writer's mate we welcome you. Hope your stay will be long : we will be with you, support you as you grow strong.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rod, to read my message, click
"inbox" on your message page.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's funny how sometimes all You need is a little tiny thing to caress You inside and let all out, Your poem gifted me this, and what have been locked inside me for two days was released with tears... maybe I'm too lonely more than I've noticed my self to be, it's also funny how words were rolling in my head with something about (odd to writers network) and its members, each member there added her/his own special touch... it was for me more like a home... I don't feel this here, sometimes I think of just taking a break and go... but with my old friends here, it gives me a reason to stay... I even considered writing You a small poem if You didn't join in as an alternative plan :)

All the credits go to wonderful Kitty, I didn't even do anything, nor even helped Your with Your problems here, You've beaten the devil alone :)
I know she is now supper happy seeing You here, considering You the good and wonderful friend.

Thank You for this beautiful piece, it touched me so tenderly, I know Kitty will appreciate it as deeply as I do✨

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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matelotrod
matelotrod

Norwich, Norfolk, United Kingdom



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Ex Royal navy and Merchant Navy now retired and pushing eighty. Prefer humour in my poetry but maybe it's only me that finds it funny! more..

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