Kr

Ganja's tendril drifts;
cradled in hazy purple.
Kryptonite to Muse.

Reviews

[Tree]

Very relaxing R.L.. Nice little piece, that had its intended desired
effect.

[icelandicblue]

Some mental EXLAX will find you. We all go through it and it is a pain. I know it won't be long before you are gracing the pages with your fine work.

[The Analog Kid]

It does pass:)

[R. L. Ives]

Thanks. I think I like writing these. It's not cryptic with metaphors, and requires few words.

[The Analog Kid]

And they are a bit challenging too.

[quinfinn]

awesome little senryu...so...are we smoking the bubonic chronic ?

[R. L. Ives]

Haha...ask me no questions, I tell you no lies.

Does this pass a senryu? If not, any suggestions?