These Things I Would Do

These Things I Would Do

A Poem by R. L. Ives

If I could paint your dreams for you
I would beseech the angels in heaven above
to sing for me a pallet of colors
never before glimpsed by the eyes of man,
And your heart would be the canvas
upon which your dreams would come true.

If I could but design and craft happiness for you
I would use the tools of love and kindness
sent to me from the greatest architects to ever live
and never a day would pass
where heartache and sadness were felt.

If I could rewrite your life for you
I would become a disciple of the most prolific writers the world has ever known,
and master the language of peace, contentment and joy,
to give you a life free from torment.

For I know you have been shackled to the demons of the past.

If only I could.

© 2020 R. L. Ives


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worry not fellow word smith after seeing that you were hesitant about going public with your thoughts and then reading the well crafted words i am here to say bravo and worry not you have sculpted wonderfully with this simple language as i am sure you will continue to

Posted 11 Years Ago


R. L. Ives

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughtful review. I am still hesitant, but finding it being less so. I can onl.. read more
What gorgeous sentiments you have identified. You have woven them into a beautiful tapestry. Such plans for those you love, if only ... if only.

Posted 11 Years Ago


R. L. Ives

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review. I am very touched. And yes, if only.
such beautiful thought of such wondrous things, so lovingly written. makes the reader long to be the object of your affections. this is gorgeous writing, Randi. definitely one of your very best!

Posted 11 Years Ago


R. L. Ives

11 Years Ago

I feel so humbled and uplifted at the same time. Thank you for such a kind and lovely review.
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

every picture tells a story, you painted a lovely one here
lovely thoughts the things you would do for love
written well and the lines are well placed
if I could like that
thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


R. L. Ives

11 Years Ago

Thank you Holly for visiting and leaving your thoughts.

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A Poem by R. L. Ives