Here With Me

Blessed and showered in love,

You comfort me like a mother dove.

 

Guiding my steps and holding my hands,

Your footsteps are in mine, walking through the sand.

 

Unworthy I am, to deserve this and more,

But you open my life to a brand new door.

Reviews

[Authoricus]

Is this a duet? Maybe the 'Battling Banjo's'? Time for us to hear from the other strings.
A!

[LSS]

OK Reggie, You're sounding like a girl now. Lauren, you need to open your blossom and not hide behind your husband's skirts any more. Its time for you to let him stand alone. You need to move your stuff over to your own site, so your husband can admire you from afar. Lets see if he can put his type 1A to good use and create.
Lar

[DRIVEN]

aww yes, very sweet indeed...more please:)

[curley]

Simple and sweet, and soothing too. I feel like I can relate to this. I also think you could expand more, maybe add a few more couplets. Nice job, you have a good rhythm going. God bless.