Loving you...

Loving you...

A Poem by Rachel
"

when you love someone you want them to be happy no matter what, even if their happiness doesn't include you

"

smiling,

bringing the corners of my mouth up

and then turning them into a smile.

all for you...

hiding,

i do not want to smile;

my soul is hurting so much.

but for you...

lieing,

every second in front of you

is pain in disguise for me.

yet for you...

 

I will smile.

I will lie.

 

© 2011 Rachel


Author's Note

Rachel
notice that the first "stanza" is slightly bigger... this shows that the second is almost like a whisper or afterthought...

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Beautiful.
Very tender and heartfelt write.
You penned it very smoothly and filled with feelings.
Loved this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on November 2, 2011
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Tags: love, smiling, lies

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Fort Smith, AR



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