Till The Coldness Wears Off

Till The Coldness Wears Off

A Poem by Riya Rashmi

Let me taste some paranoia

On the tip of your sunburned tongue,

And revel in parallel worlds

Of hardship and ecstasy.


Let us fall into each other -

I'm the moth and you the flame;

Till the coldness wears off

Like a weary satin night dress.


Let me wake up in heaven,

Tired and teary eyed;

Let this warmth never fade

Into the darkness of the day.

© 2013 Riya Rashmi


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'Into the darkness of the day', wow, Riya....is that different or what? 'Revel in parallel worlds' ? Well that is just so. I know what you mean by this wonderful poem. I often wish the same would happen to me. I can relate to this very well. Thanks for the feeling it gave me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riya Rashmi

11 Years Ago

That is very sweet! ^_^ Thank you for such a lovely review



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Beautiful!! You are indeed talented

Posted 11 Years Ago


just wondering, what do you mean by "sunburned tongue"?

Posted 11 Years Ago


'Into the darkness of the day', wow, Riya....is that different or what? 'Revel in parallel worlds' ? Well that is just so. I know what you mean by this wonderful poem. I often wish the same would happen to me. I can relate to this very well. Thanks for the feeling it gave me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riya Rashmi

11 Years Ago

That is very sweet! ^_^ Thank you for such a lovely review
A beautiful dream or a wish that is soooo lovely and romantic. I like the imagery you use to convey...Bravo...:)...........

Posted 11 Years Ago


Riya Rashmi

11 Years Ago

Thank you Sami :) I'm really happy you liked my poem :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:).....................
You transported me to another place, away from a ruthless, cold world, where solace and warmth never wane. Great poetry Riya. Just wonderful to read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Riya Rashmi

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words, Divya :)
AYVID N

11 Years Ago

You are welcome Riya. Keep writing!

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Riya Rashmi
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