A Moment

I love the sight of sunlight streaming through leaves :) A series of senryus

The green leaves are soaked

After the warm summer rain

In the midst of May

Sunlight streams through leaves

Sparrows chirp and fly around

In the tranquil yard

The shadows of trees

Paint the features of your eyes,

You lean in slowly

Your kiss arrests time;

Breeze ruffles my dupatta -

The sun is setting

Author's Note

I hope you don't get bored by my fascination with rain :P

Oh, and if you don't know, a dupatta is a kind of long scarf :)

Reviews

[Karen]

I absolutely love how poets can manipulate words and images together and create something as beautiful as this poem within the delicate confines of Senryu or Haiku. This is one of those poems. I love the nature imagery, and I too love the rain! That last stanza about the kiss is beautiful! Excellent choice of words and images!

[Riya Rashmi]

Thank you so much for reviewing my poem! ^_^ I'm really happy you liked it and left such a lovely review.

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks for explaining dupatta I love rain..it adds color to the poem as well as the sun.

[Riya Rashmi]

I agree! Thank you :)

[AYVID N]

First, very vivid and lovely description of nature, Riya. My compliments. Regarding dupatta, you can replace it with 'garments / scarf, for this beautiful poem to have universal appeal.(i see smurfett was stumped :))

You have a great fondness for nature which translates into beautiful writing!

[Riya Rashmi]

Thank you for the sweet review ^_^ I thought a lot about including that word, but finally decided that it describes me best :P I will look for further feedback and change it if needed :)

[D. T. Wine]

The poem holds great imagery, I could almost touch the dewy leaves, or feel the sunshine on my face. The flow left me calm, quiet, at peace. That is an impressive feat.

[Riya Rashmi]

Thank you for your words of appreciation :)

[Chris]

Welcome to WC. A calm and tranquil peacefulness shared and remembered

[Riya Rashmi]

Thank you :) I'm glad you felt peaceful after reading this

[smurfett]

Too funny poet....as I was finishing the final line, I was thinking what's a dupatta? lol Then I read your note. It is easy to get lost in the rain...the whole idea of it is calming, restoring and refreshing....I also love the rain...Very vivid is your poem. Thank you

[Riya Rashmi]

Rain is wonderful. It is calming and soothing. Like your review! ^_^