From dusk to dawn ..:!

simplicity of a day ..with a message ..!

..From dusk to dawn ..! 

from dusk to dawn ..some one say my frown ..

from dusk to dawn...something stole my heart ..

from dusk to dawn ...some one ruled the world ..

from dusk to dawn..something lost its glow..

from dusk to dawn ...someone left the world ..

from dusk to dawn ..something changed everything ..

from dusk to dawn ...someone lost hope ..

from dusk to dawn ..something paved all the ways ..

from dusk to dawn ..someone rejoiced on victory  ..

from dusk to dawn ..a lot many changes took place ..

from dusk to dawn what did not change is me & my courage ...from dusk to dawn ..

from dusk to dawn ..i live ..i live ..n i live ...

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Brilliantly crafted, with stunning imagery, language, cadence and rhyming.

[rithvii]

thank you !

[nibhz]

just three words that this poem says- LIFE GOES ON!!

[rithvii]

thank you soo much ........:)

[Leeci]

i like the message in your poem, about the continuityof life. life, regardless of its circumstances goes on. time waits for no one, I like that you tied in courage to it so that there's a positive outlook on life in your poem. good job :)

[rithvii]

thank you !