SO broken ....!

A poem that talks heart to heart ..A sincere tribute to *DAMINI*

.....SO BROKEN ...

So broken a bird feels when shot with an arrow .

So broken a flower feels on being dropped as dry dust .

So broken a teddy feels when hug & cried with .

So broken a cloud feels when called black .

So broken a girl feels when ignored all time .

So broken a wish feels when it cant be true .

So broken I feel when I cant do anything ..

So inferior I feel ..So defeated I feel 

WHEN I CANT DO ANYTHING ...ALL I can do is to laugh at my soo broken confidence ..

SOOOO broken 

Reviews

[nibhz]

can feel the pain in the poem, well written

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Wow, the best thing is to fight with anything or anybody that tries to break you.

[rithvii]

thnk u for your comments ..:)