Time

Time

A Poem by Kimmy
"

Time, where has it gone?

"

 

TIME

 

Time keeps ticking

Ticking away with the hands of time

Wasting away

Where has it all gone?

Daylight, darkness and in between

Just dwindling away

Not replaceable

Nor predictable

Neither right, nor wrong

Take a breath and relax

Time will always be around

 

© 2008 Kimmy


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I like the personification of time in the last line and how it "will always be around."
Time is always so confining but maybe if we destroy those constraints it will supplement our lives instead of destroying them.
Nice write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on December 3, 2008

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Kimmy
Kimmy

Warwick, RI



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