No Emotions

No Emotions

A Poem by Kimmy
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A little something that I wrote last night

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No Emotions

 

No emotions how can this be.

Feelings of impossibility.

Not knowing to turn left or right.

Trying to understand, why make it a fight.

Looking at people and trying to see.

Just how messed up the world can be.

No love between races.

Come on now, look you can see it on their faces.

No emotions how can this be.

We can change all this with a smile from you to me.

© 2008 Kimmy


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I really liked your poem. It has so much truth in it and it is very well written. It flows nicely and really has a an emotional impact, at least it did for me.

Tina

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Kimmy
Kimmy

Warwick, RI



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