Tired

Tired

 

Tired of being picked on, tired of being here.

Tired of holding on to something that was never there.

Tired of making decisions that mean life or death.

Tired of broken promises, broken with that last breath.

Tired of feeling scared, just wish I could give up.

Tired of this emptiness, life so unfulfilled.

Tired of all the sadness, I should of took all the pills.

Tired of the nightmares, tired of the grief.

Tired of all the insanity, I should be standing in the street.

Tired of sadness, tired of the shame.

Tired of all the immature brats playing their stupid kid games.

Tired of the anger, I wish I wasn't so mean.

Tired of the pain deep in my heart.

Tired of the fact that my life just fell apart.

Tired of hating, hating only myself.

Tired of not being that trophy which can be put on a shelf.

Tired of the jealousy, I let it get in the way.

Tired of having these feelings for you each and everyday.

Tired of thinking that there's always something wrong.

Tired of wondering, wondering should I let it last that long.

Author's Note

just let me know how you like it....be honest...I can take it

Reviews

Awesome!!! It's amazing how, in a few lines, you're able to express tons of emotions and you're able to penetrate to the very heart of life. Keep up the excellent work!!!

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I Loved it... i think you expressed your emotions amazingly throughout this poem... i think that it was absolutly a great poem! It made me the reader feel your emotions and I know that i could relate to the feelings that you portrayed... Great job!

[Nova]

This was good. You did a good job expressing you feelings through this poem.

[Shadows of Sight]

Honestly, i liked the way it flowed on down the lines, covering much of what your mind and heart has endured. I feel that this is a sign of someone who beats themselves up more then they ought to. Many things in life arn't our doing, even though we may think they are.

A wise sage once said to me, "When life is at it's worst stand on one leg. You will soon find it takes very little effort to do this, so why not walk in a new direction. For you have put to much in the problems that can soon be left behind."

Great Write! :)