Just See

A justification of my love.

Forget the past and just see me; in this present reality.

Please forgive my agression of sublime rejection, I could not see that you were standing right in front of me.

Toss and turn, I fight inside, oh how I used to want thee so badly.

My adoration,yet,  was not in a mature and respectable state.

Flirt. Here and there I twiddled away mere encounters of acceptance.

Pushing you farther to the back of my mind, I knew you were the one. Why did you have to be so blatantly beautiful?

Soon enough though, I saw to my existence that you were always there for me.

Waiting. Wanting. Pleading. Trying.

To get me to see.

That you wanted to free and be one, with me.

So here I am...

Falling to my knees, I plea an attempt of utter honesty; "Why can't thee just believe me?".

I cry every night, inside, "Will he ever see?".

How now, I know, that I will only love thee.

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Reminds me of the word "limerance".

[Dr. Wood ?]

I agree with Zainul, a very classical sounding piece, full of want and yearning...sadness, but with a tiny sprinkling of HOPE

[zainul]

Classical poetry transplanted nicely in modern piece.
Love the way you plead for reconciliation.
Well done,Kathleen.

[krish]

wow, nice write, your writing way is diff, to others, liked this piece.

[roy mccarthy]

nice write,
i liked the flow of it!