Description of me.

This is my heart in words. I am selfish.

I lie, subconsciously. 

I love power.

Controlling men is power.

I search for myself through others.

I care for you. Yes, I loved you.

 No that love was not deep enough for me to feel guilty about what I did.

Yes, that makes me very immature.

I am torn for you.

You are kind, caring, supportive, sweet, honest and everything a woman needs and wants.

I am not that woman.

Don't wait for me.

I"m not returning.

I do thank you for the moments of love you showed me.

Which was all the time with you.

I loved holding you in my arms and you holding me.

Please remember me.

Don't hold a grudge and please don't close off your heart.

Sometimes you have to jump.

 Whether it hurts or not.

I jumped to save you.

Even if I broke your heart.

I am sorry.

 

Kat. 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Suzy Sunshine]

That was really touching. I feel as if the feelings you're feeling are mine, too. I really understand this. You're a great writer. You have talent. Keep writing!

[Eagle Cruagh]

"It`s not you, it`s me" !
Sing his praises while you run over him with a truck.
I hope those lines don`t stick to your story, after all they are
my idea, not yours and I don`t think the subject of your poem is
the object of our reviews. We don`t check your morals at this door,
this is simply where we check out your writing.
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I checked your writing here and I found your topic to be interesting and the
way you handled it was very talented and although of a personal nature, neat.
Handling a tricky subject such as this can run down hill, become maudlin or
melancholy, nothing of the sort was noted . You cooled it !

My rating: 100 %
---- Eagle Cruagh

[Windy]

This is so sad yet so truthful. "I jumped to save you, even if I broke your heart" that is an extremely powerful sentence. Great piece of writing. sounds truly heartfelt.

[RHEA CROSLEY]

That is a very sad story. Someone who is so hurt inside that they are afraid of the commitment of true love.
someone who needs some healing and wise counsel. Very well written to the heart of an injured soul.