Confession

Saelin confesses to her crush, Raven, her Prince charming. What's his answer???

The park is half empty at 7:30pm at night, and I rarely ever come here so late. But I'm on a mission, one that could change my life. I use my left hand to go through my brown ebony hair, searching for what, who, I was looking for. I stopped gazing and looked down at my hands, trembling, awaiting the moment of confrontationa. I hear a sound behind me, and turn. There he is. A tall handsome boy, with a fierce edgy look that could mistake him for a devil.

His brown hair fanned out, and his tall lanky body stand straight. I chain necklace hangs from his neck, and his piercing green eyes make me want to melt. Rave. A stupid of a cigarette dangles from his mouth, and I suck in my breath. «you can do this» I think. And suddenly, my limbs have a mind of their own. I walk silently to him shaking.

I stand right in front of him, right in his path.
"Who the hell are you?" I flinch, biting my lip.
My voice let's out with a quarter.
"I-in Saelin, I'm in your classes-" he cuts me off right there, blowing out a puff of smoke, I hold my breath.
"And what the hell do you want with me, Saelin?" His voice is almost mocking, I had fallen for that voice. All at one I blurt out the words.
"I love you, I like you, ever since we were lab partners in freshman year. I really want to go out with you, to give this a try, I-"
"Sure, why not." Another puff of air. I cough this time, throwing myself onto him, crying. «My dreams, my crazy ridiculous, mentally ill dreams have come true» .And suddenly he pushes me away, I find myself Stumbling backwards, almost falling onto the concrete sidewalk. I feel arms wrap around my waist, and suddenly the smell of cigarettes fill my nose. Onlookers stare.

"Watch it. Oh and if you want to really prove yourself worthy of being mine," he emphasizes the last word. "Come right back at this spot, tonight at midnight." I wanted to take it, but...
"Yes, i'll come..." With a sharp turn, my dangerous, handsome Prince turned, and walked away into the distance, leaving me there, holding back tears of joy.

Author's Note

This first chapter is really short, but it was supposed to be just about her confession to him.

Reviews

[GottaSeeToBelieve]

Pretty good! I hope your next chapter might be able to be longer. Also, I think maybe you could add more description to what Saelin sees. I thought this chapter was a little quick, but maybe it's just me. Anyways, besides those I think it was actually really good and I'd like to read more! :D