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A Poem by Rin
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My life has changed greatly since I've moved to this small place.

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To feel so strange so unknown
Open different unpredictable
What to call this strangeness
What to call this newness
Fresh tingles rippling through
Hands tremble and twitch
Different smells
Different sights
Different body
New awareness
Things once unknown
Finger to skin
Different sharp new
Awoke in new
Awoke in darkness
Awoke in light
Awoke…
Awake…
Alive
Personal deep complicated
Wide open vulnerable
Wind awakening to touch
Fresh wonderful
What to call this
So very sharp
So very… refreshing
Reborn

© 2008 Rin


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I really enjoyed how you put this together...... It can be reflected on many things with life.
Moving to a new place does have the effect on a person sometimes a very good one at that.

Michelle

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I love to write just as much as I love to do visual arts. For a while I used to think I didn�t have a talent in writing, but after doing so many pieces I found out that I love to do it j.. more..

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