Is This How?

Is This How?

A Poem by Ready To Fall
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You fight me,
Now I'm as alone as I've ever felt
Thinking in the end I'll live well,
In light of the life that I have found,
It's coming down.
No time for lies or empty smiles.
I'm on your side.

Can we live a life in peace and happiness?
Do you think so?

Broken I am scared to lose the things I love,
I'm in control...
Is this how,
Is this how it's going to end?

© 2011 Ready To Fall


Author's Note

Ready To Fall
First one, hope you like it!

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This was good, but in all brutality it lacked the flow, the stanzas didnt go together to well but for oyur first poem it is good. I like the concept and the story behind it nice job. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


and you say you suck at writing, you liar! this is amazing I love it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on January 10, 2011
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