With Pen and Paper,and A Little Confession

This is about a girl who's confessing all of her thoughts through writing about a guy whom she really love.

I picked up my pen and paper,

To write a mediocre letter

To confess to you better

What my heart used to whisper.

 

In the midst of every frosty night.

As I’m sitting with you under the innocent sky

I’m dreaming of forever, while holding you tight

And treasuring every moment that passed by.

 

We laughed at each others wittiness

Shared every minute of gladsomeness

Yet I still feel the somberness,

For tomorrow is a new emptiness.

 

The moon is weakening fast,

And the night is falling into sleep

Just like having a spell that cast

By a wicked queen that hatred is too deep.

 

In my dream I’m sailing with you

Towards the golden sea of happiness

And I mirthfully come with you

As you travel to the land of loneliness.

 

As I put down my pen and paper the sun will rise,

And I could say it’s a new precious time.

I want to wake up, with you on my side.

And together we’ll dance under the mackerel sky..

Author's Note

Please let me hear your thoughts.

Reviews

[alegria]

amazing one i really loved it..too gud:))keep writing:)

[nicolo]

Beautiful. This word won't be enough.

[leinahtan]

enjoyable. admirable. inspiring. :) great work!

[amdc101]

This is beautiful. I really enjoyed the whole thing.

[whispereversolightly]

Wow your write is really amazing! Such poetry in motion here, Love the flow and rhyme scheme. I really enjoyed this. Outstanding write.