Empty

I miss it, I missed those, I miss her, I missed chance

It’s strong.
I linger in the midst of the dark,
what could’ve been?
We get too comfortable,
Those days it seemed not to make sense all because of one's ego, self esteem isn't that bad of a thing but when you start feeling yourself more important in any situation , dispute and expect others to do what you want it becomes a really bad thing.
As you lay next to the wall, you talk and expect it to talk back. You go to the wall because you know it has no judgement like water has no enemy. What you do it gives you back, hit it you feel pain, talk to it you hear yourself, lean on and it won't fall.
A bunch of senseless meaningful words circle his head with hope of putting dots on those i's.
It was strong

Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

This was pretty good. It sounds like you just needed to get this out to the universe. There were some grammatical errors that threw me off a bit but I looked beyond them to see what was more important. There were also some really good lines like " walls have no judgement like water has no enemy" ...good stuff. Keep writing my friend and get it all out.