The Painful Memories

Then, one flip of a page in my textbook made my whole world come spiraling down.

Mondays, the most dreadful day of the week according to the humans. I had to go get an education, if that's what you want to call it. In my opinion, I had more knowledge than all of the teachers combined. When you're a bloodthirsty monster, reading seems like the safest way to kill time. Sure, I have no family, no friends, absolutely nothing. But, it was the fate of a newly born vampire. The ecademic occured just last year when I

was bit by my "love", or so I thought. It turns out the slimy monster was only after two things that I held dear; My virginity and my humanity. He had gotten what he desired the most and I had gotten what I deseved, Hell. The reason to why I deserved this was very simple really.

Last year at my old school I was known as the, "school skank". I had flirted and kissed every male in the school that I could get my hands on. Unfortunately everyone thought that meant that I had slept with them all. Only one person knew that I was saving my virtue and he

wasn't even human. His name was Maxwell Monroe.

Maxwell Monroe, 17 years of age, beautiful golden eyes and a smile that made 14 year old girls screech with want. He was

friendly, the school's star lacross player and he was a straight "A" student. Not one person could see a flaw in him, not even me. We

went out for a very limited time until one night his blood lust got the better of him.

 You see, when a vampire lusts for human blood, it's not the only part of their prey they crave for. They also crave for the human's body, which I had not known at the time. If your blood happens to leak while you're around a vampire you had better escape or else the consequnces could be deadly. Had I known this, I wouldn't have gone to Max's house to study.

 We were at his kitchen table, studying for finals like most human students would. That one flip of a page in my textbook made

my whole world come spiraling down. I had gotten a tiny paper cut from the paper swiping across my soft skin. All I did was curse

and licked the red liquid off, thinking that it wasn't anything dangerous. I looked up at Max and he was staring at my cut, but it

wasn't a worried expression he had on his face. He licked his lips and I froze in my chair. His eyes were a deep crimson red and

before I had time to react he had me on the floor, biting my neck while taking me. When I awoke he was no longer nearby and it

was rumored that he had run away. So I faced my transformation from school skank to creature of the night, alone.

 After I figured out what a monster I was I knew I couldn't stay living with humans until I controlled mysef. I had broken into blood

banks and drank any blood I could sink my teeth into. My parents had no idea about my whereabouts and I don't think they even

realized I had taked 1 million dollars from them. It's not like they would have cared, they had their precious material items and

cash so they didn't need me. I had moved into anew town and started my life as a vampire.

                       

Author's Note

Please, please, please tell me if i made a grammar error, I'm really no good at it. Tell me what you think of my first chapter!

Reviews

[Adrian Dawne]

Hmhm... interesting. I thought this was good. Did you paragraph this chapter, since it kinda confused me XP though it wasn't your fault, it's the fault of the computer that copies and pastes weirdly... I thought it was really good! The thing I was thinking about would be the voice of the main character. The intro had a different voice than the one in the first chapter, so one way that could be fixed is using the good vocabulary like the intro. That would be really nice, since the intro REALLY caught me. Awesome job Alison!

[shadadakiya]

wow that was great you did really wonderful on this