in our time

in our time

A Poem by dan
"

if love is theoretical, this is an appropriate thesis

"


as we’re sifting through the laughter


in our passages of time,


we discover hidden secrets


but no reason for the rhyme.


 


we sail through life in unity


if slightly faint of heart,


we’ll never need reunion if


we never split apart.


 


if we never contemplate the split,


or beg each for forgiveness,


we display love, unconditional,


enveloped by love’s goodness


 


if our love is questioned, we believe


it stands so resolutely that if


one might try to test the strength


one will fail so absolutely.


 


dan © 2015


Music: "Time," by The Alan Parsons Project


© 2015 dan


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we sail through life in unity
if slightly faint of heart,
we’ll never need reunion if
we never split apart.

Absolutely Stunning

Posted 9 Years Ago


dan

9 Years Ago

Nisreenaa, It's so easy for me to write this type of piece with my inspiration, my lovely wife Dee, .. read more
I love the last strophe Dan. It speaks so strongly of the absolute belief in Love and it's unshakable foundation. I think when you have that, you look at life much differently than those who do not. I read your comment to Aaron about your wife being an inspiration for these romantic writes. She makes a great muse as my husband does for me. Thanks for sharing this bit of your love with us.
Jan

Posted 9 Years Ago


dan

9 Years Ago

It's my pleasure to share, and I'm glad that you (with your husband as muse) can identify with the s.. read more
JayceeC

9 Years Ago

I think you've been on mine more than the opposite...you're always welcome, but do not feel obligate.. read more
dan

9 Years Ago

plus-minus...apples-oranges...why keep score, just enjoy the game...take care...dan
Awesome write. So true. I'm a ratin 100# keep it coming.

Posted 9 Years Ago


dan

9 Years Ago

IM, Thanks so much for your kind words. It's so easy to write poems of love when one is inspired by .. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

So true my friend. And you are welcome.
I love the flow in this one Dan.
"if we never contemplate the split,
or beg each for forgiveness,
we display love, unconditional,
enveloped by love’s goodness"

I really like that stanza... it just supports the belief that if you aren't thinking negatively and thinking what if we split then the love will stay pure... love each other unconditionally. It's a beautiful piece that can serve to many couples as inspiration :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


dan

9 Years Ago

With my lovely wife Dee as inspiration, these types of writes are almost TOO easy to pen. She gets h.. read more
AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

That is awesome... you are a lucky man :)
dan

9 Years Ago

Roger that!
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A really good easy flowing love Poem.A sweet write Dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


dan

9 Years Ago

Inspired by my own true love, my lovely wife Dee. Thanks for the kind words. take care...dan
wow , the write and song just pure perfection DAN. From start to finish you had me captivated..the rhyming the flow, the word choice...just superb. I am fast becoming a fan dear friend!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


dan

9 Years Ago

When inspired by MY one true love, my lovely wife Dee, these words flow in a straight line from hear.. read more
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dedicated to dee, who is merely my world

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