forgotten warrior

forgotten warrior

A Poem by dan
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written about 7 years ago, it's about being tired of seeing all of our military volunteers coming home in boxes

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forgotten warrior

 

before I slip into unconsciousness,

walking the tightrope of concertina wire,

the voices must be studied, then answered,

then the self-immolation may begin in earnest.

 

tortured soldiers seek medication-kisses on

metaphysical (metaphorical) foreheads; they

realize that “support the troops” is code for

“support flag-draped coffins.”

 

before I slip into irreversible coma status,

the delicate dainty doctors discuss derailing

my incandescent spark of impending doom/gloom,

essentially tossing out the flamethrower with the bath water.

 

          ...leaving a bed filled with ashes

          (and little else).

 

                        

riki © 2008

© 2015 dan


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Painful reminder of the war and its malign claws. If I may offer a suggestion, that you can totally disregard - how about "medicated kisses" instead?
Again, a powerful write!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


dan

9 Years Ago

I actually, in my first few drafts of 'warrior', did have it as 'medicated kisses.' I changed it bec.. read more
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9 Years Ago

:) Aha - great minds think alike ^_^
My God man, this is staggering...one verse after another! I am so proud of you...even though I've only known you for a couple of days. Your talent is amazing!

My best,
Kelly

Posted 9 Years Ago


dan

9 Years Ago

Kelly, Thank you so much. I don't usually get political in my writing because of the polarizing natu.. read more
I love you rhythm and style and tongue and cheek wit about you. Another masterpiece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


dan

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Rico. I'm glad you enjoyed it. take care...dan
No matter how you slice it, there's nothing glamorous about war. I feel for the families whenever I hear another soldier has fallen. Tragic. Good writing dan.

Posted 9 Years Ago


dan

9 Years Ago

Ana, Thank you for the read and review. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. take care...dan

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