FACEBOOK

She said that
He said this
A continuous rat
We watch
we laugh
but to what avail?
No one sees the actual truth
What lies behind the walls of proof
It's not a game
but it's such a shame
Lets get off the internet and stay away.....

Reviews

[Rahul]

Hahahaha :)
i think the same what you think about FACEBOOK..:P, it's such a addiction you know. Those who're already trapped in this net and those who're getting FACEBOOK's DRUGS everyday, everyminute and every sec. no one's gonn save them from PAIN...that pain which couldn't be wash by RAIN...indeed.
you words're real and so nice, powerful and totally hit the heart cu...z...it's the same what i think of it.
you've plucked this piece as a flower and jotted/pasted that flower here in your own way.

your smoothness's working to me as a scent of a sent "LAYER"..lol and you're gonna hit the sky very soon, so keep writing.
Unlimited/100 :)

[zainul]

Speaks my heart.
But,got tangled with complex cobweb.
Can't see any escape.
Wonderful write.
Congratulation!!!

["writing by" KS]

Very wise.. nice honesty.

[YouoweYoupay]

Lovely truth.

[Chris]

Wise thoughts that few follow...

[Emrick]

Thumbs up.(i agree with you).

[nathan]

This poem's good. The brevity of your words didn't hurt the subject matter at all

[Melinda Weber]

It sucks, because the very thing that is draining us, is the thing that is keeping us alive. The internet is a massive market, and it's as common as a glass of water. Nice poem.