Call Down the Moon
A Poem by
Rie Sheridan Rose
Call down the moon
and we'll ride the wind
to find the fields where
the dragons lie.
The rainbow's end is
bathed in stardust
and the pixies dance
to the nightingale's song.
The Milky Way
becomes our river
as our ship explores
the sapphire sky.
It's fueled by dreams...
and the magic of a smile.
© 2015 Rie Sheridan Rose
Reviews
beautiful and vivid imagery in this fantasy write! enjoyed the flow of words and the ending is perfect!
you might consider to edit the typo 'nightengale'.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks! Fixed now.
9 Years Ago
u r welcome! :)
I really love it how you use expensive words!
Posted 10 Years Ago
I really love it how you use expensive words!
So very beautiful and ever so wonderful.
I just love a wonderful fantasy write!
This is amazing, Very well written.
Posted 14 Years Ago
So very beautiful and ever so wonderful.
I just love a wonderful fantasy write!
This is amazing, Very well written.
Your magical poem just took me to a journey of great fantasy.....
Thanks for sharing....
I love you works...
-Cuppie
Posted 15 Years Ago
Your magical poem just took me to a journey of great fantasy.....
Thanks for sharing....
I love you works...
-Cuppie
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
You really havea great talent. Great poem.
Author; Nancy Lee Shrader
Posted 15 Years Ago
You really havea great talent. Great poem.
Author; Nancy Lee Shrader
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
look at that moon, inspirational, methinks i will write about the moon, its beautiful, gosh, moons are so non tangable, :S :) xx ,mishy
Posted 16 Years Ago
look at that moon, inspirational, methinks i will write about the moon, its beautiful, gosh, moons are so non tangable, :S :) xx ,mishy
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Idid ... but the moon stayed where it was...why? just because...
Posted 16 Years Ago
Idid ... but the moon stayed where it was...why? just because...
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
This poem was nice to read. Very creative with the dragons, and pixies and such. Thanks for sharing!
-Bryce
Posted 16 Years Ago
This poem was nice to read. Very creative with the dragons, and pixies and such. Thanks for sharing!
-Bryce
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Lovely imagery in a rhythmic flow. It is full of fantasy, the sort of stuff dreams themselves are made of. Bravo! Margaret
Posted 16 Years Ago
Lovely imagery in a rhythmic flow. It is full of fantasy, the sort of stuff dreams themselves are made of. Bravo! Margaret
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Very nice--I like it. It's well-crafted, image-laden and imaginative. Very good, Rie.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Very nice--I like it. It's well-crafted, image-laden and imaginative. Very good, Rie.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on June 19, 2008
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Rie Sheridan Rose TX
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I'm a Texas girl, born and bred. I have a bachelor's degree in Technical Theater, and another in Asian Studies. Learning is one of my favorite hobbies. :) I am the eldest of four sisters, and that was..
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