Call Down the Moon

 

Call down the moon

and we'll ride the wind

to find the fields where

the dragons lie.

The rainbow's end is

bathed in stardust

and the pixies dance

to the nightingale's song.

The Milky Way

becomes our river

as our ship explores

the sapphire sky.

It's fueled by dreams...

and the magic of a smile.

Reviews

[Indra Neil]

beautiful and vivid imagery in this fantasy write! enjoyed the flow of words and the ending is perfect!
you might consider to edit the typo 'nightengale'.

[Rie Sheridan Rose]

Thanks! Fixed now.

[Indra Neil]

u r welcome! :)

[BubblingMe]

I really love it how you use expensive words!

[deeps]

So very beautiful and ever so wonderful.
I just love a wonderful fantasy write!
This is amazing, Very well written.

[Cuppie]

Your magical poem just took me to a journey of great fantasy.....
Thanks for sharing....
I love you works...
-Cuppie

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

You really havea great talent. Great poem.

Author; Nancy Lee Shrader

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

look at that moon, inspirational, methinks i will write about the moon, its beautiful, gosh, moons are so non tangable, :S :) xx ,mishy

[Tomás Ó C..]

Idid ... but the moon stayed where it was...why? just because...

[Bryce Simonds]

This poem was nice to read. Very creative with the dragons, and pixies and such. Thanks for sharing!
-Bryce

[Margaret Barton-Wahl]

Lovely imagery in a rhythmic flow. It is full of fantasy, the sort of stuff dreams themselves are made of. Bravo! Margaret

[Samuel Dickens]

Very nice--I like it. It's well-crafted, image-laden and imaginative. Very good, Rie.