Dance in the Rain

for Gandre

 

 

Dance in the rain
to the Spring symphony.

Drown in the wonder
of the liquid universe.

Embrace the blind poet
within your translucent soul.

Create with your heart
until you learn to see.

Reviews

[mhanv]

Thank you for sharing your poem. It reminds me of the Bob Dylan quote, "some people feel the rain, others just get wet." Though your poem is short, each words seems deliberately chosen and creates great imagery of carefree dancing in the rain.

[deeps]

Simply Stunning! Enjoyable read!

[Lena M. P.]

Fluid (no pun intended) and picturesque. Imagery is superb.

[Katie]

I love how it is short and to the point maybe you caould add a little somthing likemaybe it needs somthing but i love it anyways

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

very inspiring, a symphony is so completely capturing of rain, spring,
and the 'liquid universe" very powerful in itself description,
I can visually and tentavely feel you poem, Rie, absolutely lovely,

---mishel

[James K. Blaylock]

Absolutely beautiful!

jkb