Lies

letter with lies

At first,
I didn't thought that you'll give me such thing
A letter that I didn't expect
And your thoughts are there.

You said;
"I'm sorry for what I've done.
I can't simply change without you
And I like just the way you are."

So I thought,
"Hey, is he serious?
He liked me the way I am
And he said sorry."

And I said to myself,
I'm too lucky
I received a letter from him
And it made me smile for months.

But as expected,
I knew something.
He lied.
He used his sweet words to make me idiot.

I was shocked,
Confused.
I don't know what to do.
And my tears fell from my eyes.

But as I walk,
to this cold and cruel world.
I realized that he's just someone.
Someone to test me.

I just smiled after
And said to myself;
"Thanks for coming to my life
And made me realize that I'm too weak.
Too weak to not realize that you're using me.
And just to hurt me so much."

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Tomi]

i get the idea of this, however a few grammar issues might just take the life off your poem. e.g second line, i didn't think not... thought.. you might want to go over it again. keep writing
tomi