My Perfect Lover

He's my perfect lover.
Not exactly perfect,
But he's perfect for me.
His eyes,
His shiny eyes that melts my heart.
His lips,
Red like Snow White
And gives me a sweet peck on my cheeks.
His hands,
Protects me and shelters me from the wind.
His body,
That gives me warmth when I'm cold or alone.
His looks,
That makes every girls fell for.
Not only his appearance that makes him perfect.
His kindness also that he’s been showing to everyone especially to me.

Author's Note

Any comments or suggestion?

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a very good piece. Guys who are like that are the sweet ones. Most kind guys are the ones who will be taken and won't pick on you. Thanks for sharing.

[Tomi]

in my opinion, your description of your lover is largely not so deep, except in the last line when you talked about his kindness. i'll love to read about more enduring values than the looks and physical attributes, if indeed am to believe in love... it's just my opinion. keep writing