Live Life

enjoy life...

Live your life at its fullest

Live your life as if it is your last

A life comes only once

Enjoy it.

Have fun.

Do the things you’ve never done

Say what you want to say

Run where you want to go

Dream and reach it

Sing so everyone can understand you

Dance till the day pass

Live your life

And never regret it

Author's Note

Comments?

Reviews

[WriterSki7]

I'm going to venture out and say this isn't your best work. It's nice, yeah, but I'm sure you can do much better. So, instead of smiling in your face and saying "good job, don't change it" I'm going to give you advice on how to make it better. After all, there's no room for improvement if you just keep everything the same, right?

1-Elaborate more on what's important on life. What about life should we experiance? Singing and Dancing and Dreaming are good, but is that all life has to offer?

2-What is there to live for? Life is short, but does that make it futile? Are we simply meaningless collections of protiens that are the result of radiation some x billion years ago? What makes life special?

You can leave it there, or you can Improve. I'm fine if you want to keep it the same. Honestly, I am. But why stop when you can be the best you can be?

My two cents ;)

[maryjaneuy]

i enjoyed this one. very true. :)

[Dillon Cotter]

This is beautiful yet so true. I love writers who write the truth from there hearts, it gives usa great feeling of accomplishment. Well done!!

-Will

[Thomas Fleet]

Not much I can say about it. It's your work and I like it and wouldn't change it. It simply states that we need to live our life to the fullest, because this life is the only one we have.
Thanks for the great read.