Pride or friendship?

a frindship didn't end well because of pride

At 1 pm,

I realized something

That is special to me

I lost you

 

Who would think?

We’ll end up this way

We’ve been good to each other

And we’re closer than ever

 

Our closeness is unexplainable

Your friends are jealous

Even your best friend

Thought that we’re lovers

 

Our friendship is so magical

So magical that no one thought of it

It started with a smile

Yet it ended this way

 

I’ve been emotional

And I took it seriously

You didn’t know that I acted that way

And that’s how a friendship end

 

It is like a story that no one understands

It is different from fairytales

With prince and princess

Who lived happily ever after

 

This friendship is like a song

A song that is sad

And never have a happy ending

Does it really have to end like this?

 

Why did it happen?

Is it me or you?

Maybe it’s me

Because of my little pride

 

This pride of mine end this

When I think of it

Pride or friendship

Maybe I chose pride

 

If I didn’t chose that

Maybe this story can still end well

But this line entered my brain:

“It is better to end a friendship if your pride is much important.”

 

Maybe…

That’s the reason of this.

Well, maybe this is a goodbye...

Author's Note

Sorry if it is too dramatic and long. Comments?

Reviews

[Holly-Marie]

Very dramatic, although that's a good thing =)
A good read. I enjoyed it =)

[WriterSki7]

Depends on the Drama.
It's worth it if it comes from the heart, no?

[Tate Morgan]

I am sad to see the end But I have to say the wrong words and tenses are used at times losing me along the way

[alison13]

no worries, it's not that long and dramatic. i just got lost at the first stanza

I realized something
That is special to me
I lost you

well, it seems when i read it, like the special thing to you was having the loss. but it's still a good write. :)

[maryjaneuy]

This one is too sad. Still, it's great. You really expressed your feelings very well. keep it up. :D