Memories of the past answer

Girl's point of view

I entered to another world today
A world that is new and blank
I'm nervous and scared
Yet happy 'cause I can start again

I loved someone else before
I really love him
Yet he didn't what I give to him
My heart and my life

But I didn't thought
Someone will come to my life
He'll be the one who'll changed everything
And change me

We've been together for months
And that months passed like days
Because when I'm with him
I'm so happy

Those days
I started to fall in love with him
His smile, his laughter, his jokes
And he makes me special

But days passed
Time changes and people change too
We had a misunderstanding
And after that, everything changed

Even though he's around
Even though I can see him smile
I can't go near him
Or laugh with him

Now I'm not with him
I started to miss him
Without him,
I felt loneliness

But I realize
I should cherish those days
That I've been with him
And say that he's just a part of my memories
My memories in the past

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[Mr Whiskers]

One thing is the tenses of some things and a little grammar, but I noticed your pro page says you're in Philippines, so maybe it's really just a translation kinda thing. I love the feel of it and still the meaning comes through. It's the last stanza calling out "and the moral of this story is: *I should cherish those days.*" Good write.