Wishing star

Wishing star

A Poem by rielovella
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a girl wishing for something she had before

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As I see the night

With the stars in the sky

I saw a wishing star

And wished that you’re here

 

Too many nights

That I felt alone

I’m no longer with you

And I miss you so much

 

Whenever I see you

Like the way I see the stars

A star that I can’t reach

Even though it is near me

 

You’re happy with them

Which I saw when we’re together

When I see you laugh or smile

I smile too

 

When you’re with her

I felt jealousy

You’re with her now

Not with me

 

This night, I see a wishing star again

I still wished the same wish

But is this right

That I only wish is you?

© 2010 rielovella


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i really like the base of this story.
i myself, have felt jelouse and wished upon eyelashes (not stars)
but i like the connection to the real world. keep it up. (:

Posted 14 Years Ago



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rielovella
rielovella

Muntinlupa, Philippines



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I'm Liriel. 15 years old girl living in Philippines I like writing stories about love(especially about S.H.E. and Fahrenheit. In short, fanfic. :) ) and poems(if I'm inspired). I write likeS.. more..

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