Hate and Love

the reasons to hate someone you love :)

I hate your eyes
Your big and brown eyes.
I hate your lips,
Your red lips

I hate your kindness.
You're too good to everyone.
I hate your smile.
Your smile that melts my heart.

I hate your jokes.
Your jokes that makes me smile.
I hate your intelligence.
Too intelligent that you already know my plans.

I hate the way you make your way.
That everyone notices you
I hate the way you stare
The stare that I can't look at

I hate these things because I like you
I never wanted to like you
But these things made me
To love you more and more

Author's Note

Comments?

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I like it. It was awesome. Those are some reasons i hate some people too. Like my friend Tim except the top one. I don't pay attention to that.

[DarkBlueDaisy]

good poem

[AmeliaMae]

Wow. This was really good. I love reading your poems! :D

[Scarlett Willows]

the line that reads "i hate the way you make you way" threw me off from the whole poem, try revising the words of that line because it's a bit to complex for the simple poem.

[maryjaneuy]

wow. another great poem of yours. you know what I never get tired of reading your poems. whenever there are new request and it's from you, i always read it. XD

[James Fisher]

I like the poem alot because of how you express that the girl hates the guy but in explaining it says how she likes him that way too.