Untitled

I named it 'Untitled' because I don't know yet what title I should use

Before I met you,
My life is so different
The skies are dark
Flowers didn't bloom
Everyone's so gloomy
It is always like this
Loneliness, grudges
This is what I feel

But in an instance,
You entered my dark and cruel world
You came without hesitation
Your smile changed darkness to light
When I'm with you,
Flowers became as beautiful as the sun
You changed everything

I smiled a lot
I forget my past
And I faced the future
With you, I'm sure
You'll be here
Always in my world

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

I like this And I always say distill your thoughts to the lowest common denominator make them short and sweet as you did here
tate

[J]

This is Nice :]

[Demetria.Ro$e.Hathaway]

This is a grate poem