Haunted Castle Part 2 (ESCAPING)

  After the event happening with Minhaj uncle all of us were in the sitting room, everyone was very tensed. I didn't want to die so fast. That haunter, which has haunting us until now, didn't yet harm us that much, but what if he does the second time. He did harm Minhaj uncle a little bit, although it wasn't that much, he was harmed. What if he harms us more in future? I really did not feel like staying there. 

  "Guys! Does it mean, that until now, whatever bad thing happened with us, was actually haunted. You have heard Minhaj saying when he was senseless, that it showed symbols of not coming here. Did he mean of those mobile turning on and off?" my cousin Sister Happy asked. 

  "Now, I am not anymore confused, that old man running was true. It must have been one of the symbol. We shouldn't have come here uncle. We shouldn't." I said. 

  "I don't know anything. I am really confused. All this days I believed that there is nothing like that. Jinns taking over human was just a false thing, but today, this scenery. I bet Minhaj would never hold my neck when he is conscious." Masud uncle said.

  "What? I touched your neck. But how?" Minhaj uncle asked. My cousin, Sunny said him everything. As soon he came to know about his work, he was more scared then ever. "I really want to go home, brother."

  "We will, let there be a little bit light outside." 

  "BOOM" a loud noise was made. It was like something had fallen down or was hit with something and it was from upstairs. We all rushed to upstairs. 

  The bookshelf in the room no.1 has fallen down, the cupboard has fallen down, there were somethings above a shelf which was attached with the wall has fallen down.

  "How on the earth, did this fall?" my cousin, Shuyeb asked. All of us were astonished by this view. 

  "Uncle, I want to go home, and now, take candles anything, but I don't want to stay here anymore.  Not even for one moment."  I cried. 

  "Yes, we want to leave now." my cousin Sunny and Happy said. 

  "CRASH" another sound came from another room. We ran the other way and saw another astonishing view. In room no.7 the window's glass was broken. The window was shut but still the glass broke, and the glass was broken in so small, it was like dust. 

  "See! This place is haunted. I am leaving, I don't know about you guys." my cousin Shuyeb and Tarek were preparing to leave. 

  "Yes, I think we all should leave now." said my cousin, Akram. "This place is not anymore safe."

  We all prepared our things and started to walk out the castle. We took two candles from the castle so that we could see the road. 

  "Boom! Boom!" another couple of sound came from the inside of castle.

  "No time to see it. We have to get out of here." Masud uncle said. 

  We ran toward the forest. At that moment none of us knew the way, so we just ran to get away from that haunted castle. We didn't know was there anything out, but we were sure that the castle was haunted. 

Author's Note

IGNORE GRAMMAR(MY MAIN PROBLEM) and SPELLING(MY SECOND MAIN PROBLEM) and VOCAB(MY THIRD MAIN PROBLEM)
TENSE may be a big deal there.
Do give me a report.