Haunted Castle Part 1

  We have reached the castle, and all of us were very exited about it. In this dark the house looked greenish surrounded by plants, the front yard of the house very small as it was mostly covered by trees. 

  "So, we are here, the old haunted castle haunted by the old ghoul." my cousin Tarek joked. 

  "Where do we stay?" asked Minhaj uncle who was the only one feeling tired. 

  "Choose a room you like, and stay there." Masud uncle said. 

  There was a number in front of every room, which proved that once it was a inn. The house was quite gloomy. It was dusty and covered with webs which quite also prove that the house was not entered by anyone for a long time. I remember I read in a book that, in a place where there is no human life, is usually taken over by the jinns. So I was having this strange feeling that, there were jinns seeing us. 

  Minhaj uncle was too tired so he chose room no.5 as it was a little bit cleaner than the other rooms, and went to sleep. But the rest of the Housefull members were not feeling to sleep. We all sat in the sitting room of the castle. It was really big and there was a fireplace which we lit up to take shelter from the cold of the night. 

  While we were gossiping, Minhaj uncle came down, which was quite astonishing as we all expected that he was already asleep. 

  "Weren't you sleeping?" I asked him but there was no answer. 

  "What happened? Why did you get up?" Misba uncle asked but still there was no answer from him. 

  "What happened why are you not talking?" asked my cousin, Taher.

  "You did a big mistake arriving this place. I showed you symbols of not coming here, but you still came. You did a big mistake." Minhaj uncle suddenly said with a rough voice and hold the neck of Masud uncle. "How dared you to come in this castle? No body is allowed here. How dare you to listen to music? You have done a mistake and you are going to suffer."

  He hold the neck of Masud uncle so tightly that he was unable to say or even do anything. 

  "What are you doing, Minhaj? Stop it." shouted my cousin, Tarek.

  "His hands are not moving. They have become like rocks." my cousin Akram said, while he and my cousin Taher was trying to move his hand from Masud uncle's neck. Masud uncle was slowly becoming weak and his eyes were shutting and that is when my sister started to shout and cry. I was not able to understand anything of the situation. Slowly every one was trying to push Minhaj uncle out of there, my brother Sumon, my cousins, Gulzar uncle, Misba uncle, all of them were trying to separate his hand from Masud uncle, but everyone failed to move him a inch. That is when suddenly my cousin Shuyeb took a vessel and broke it over Minhaj uncle's head. And at last he released his hand from Masud uncle's neck and fall in the ground senseless where Masud uncle breathed crazily feeling restless. Everybody was shocked by the sudden act of Minhaj uncle. Why did he even do this thing and how did he even get that strong. My cousin Tarif brought some water and started throwing water in his face, but still his sense did not come back.

  "Hey, look at his mouth." shouted my cousin Sunny. Saliva was coming out of his mouth from the both the side of his mouth. Everybody was getting very worried about him. 

  "I said you not to come. I did not even want to come here, but you guys forced me. Your partner has been haunted. I am not staying any more here. I am leaving. I am leaving." Mr.Jaber said with a frightening voice and ran out of the castle. He just left us alone in this castle. None of us moved to stop him because we were too busy with Minhaj uncle. 

  "What should we do?" my cousin sister, Happy asked. 

  "I am not understanding anything. I want to go home. I want to talk with Mom!" I shouted and started to cry. Tears were falling from my eyes. I was too much scared to stay there. "I knew it from the time I saw that man running. I knew it at that moment that we are not entering a safe place. Mom!" I cried in fright.

  "Emon, calm down. Let us first bring Minhaj to sense. None of us are understanding anything. Please, calm down." my cousin Akram said. My sister was also too scared and she also started to cry in fright.  My cousin, Sunny was also very afraid and was separated from us and sat at the corner of the room curling himself in fright. My cousin sister, Happy tried to make him understand, that he should not get scared. But why shouldn't we get scared. We have entered the haunted castle. 

  "Uncle, I think we should leave as soon as possible. We should leave the moment Minhaj comes to sense. I also don't feel anymore that this place is safe." my brother said.

  Suddenly Minhaj uncle got up and started murmuring something which we couldn't hear.

  "What are you telling Minhaj? Say it loudly." Misba uncle said.

  "Minhaj, come to sense. Bring water!" Gulzar uncle shouted.

  "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" shouted Minhaj uncle. "You will suffer." he said it and again went unconscious.

  I was more scared and I started cry louder. "I want to leave this place."

  "Emon, please don't cry now, the situation is a lot harder, we need the support of everyone. Minhaj has to come to sense." my cousin, Akram tried to explain me.

  "Hey, come here, he is coming to sense." shouted my cousin Shuyeb. 

  "What am I doing here? Wasn't I in the bed?" Minhaj uncle asked. "AAh! I am having a very heavy headache suddenly. I feel my head is very heavy for me to carry."

  "You must have been taken over by a jinn. My teachers said, that when a jinn takes over a body, saliva comes out of your body, then when that person comes to sense, he has headache. You had both the symbols.And of course you had the main symbol that you were acting crazy." my cousin Tarif said, which made feel that my prediction was right. Minhaj uncle was haunted. We have entered the haunted castle. 

 "What are you saying?" Minhaj uncle asked.

 "Long story, not a right time to say." Masud uncle said. 

 "So lets leave now." my sister shouted. 

 "Not now. I don't think it would be safe now to get out and secondly the outside is really dark. Lets pass the night, we will get out early in the dawn."

 "Yes, I think that would be a right decision." Gulzar uncle supported Masud uncle. "Until then, we all should stay together. None of us should not be separated. 

 Everybody had no option than accepting with Masud uncle because who knows, something worst might wait for us outside in the dark rather than in the castle.  

  

Author's Note

IGNORE GRAMMAR(MY MAIN PROBLEM) and SPELLING(MY SECOND MAIN PROBLEM) and VOCAB(MY THIRD MAIN PROBLEM)
TENSE may be a big deal there.
Do give me a report.