We are Attacked

We are Attacked

A Chapter by Ridhwanul

  The next moment, when I was sleeping, I did not know how long I slept, but I don't

think I slept for long, because soon enough a sudden strong brake was taken by the bus for which we were move out of our seat.

  "What happened? Why did the bus stop? Have we arrived?" shouted my uncle, Misba, who was even smaller than my uncle, Gulzar. 

  "Why did the bus stop?" Masud uncle asked the bus driver as he was not answering anything. He was looking pale and too much frightened.

  "What happened uncle?" asked my cousin sister, Happy.

  "I t-think t-they have a-attacked us." the bus driver said with a broken voice. 

  "Who?" Masud uncle asked.

  "The ghoul of the old man."

  "Off! Of course not. He is dead. Just check out. It might have been the tires."

  The bus driver got off to check the tires. The tires were fully okay. 

  "May be the engine caused problem." I suggested. 

  The bus driver checked the bus engine and saw black smoke coming out of it. 

  "Yeah, the engine has caused the problem, but I-I can't believe it. I checked everything this morning before starting the journey." the bus driver said. 

  "There can be a problem. It's not related with ghouls and ghost." my big cousin, Sunny said.

  "No way! This bus is really good. I am grand sure the the old man's ghoul must have came to know about we are coming, so he wants to stop us before we go to the castle of his. You must not go there."

  "Hey! Stop you stupid imagination. There is nothing like ghouls. Okay!" my big cousin, Akram said.

  "I said you, that place is haunted and you should not go there."

  "Is it really haunted uncle?" my sister asked to Masud uncle.

  "Oh! This guy is just a scary cat." my uncle whisper in the ears of my sister, though it was loud enough for all of us to hear. 

  "Look, I am not going any more. I stop here."  the bus driver said.

  "Hey! You promised to drop us in front of that tea shop near the forest. There our guide is waiting."  my cousin, Akram said with a voice of disappointment. 

  "It isn't much far. You can go there walking. I can't drive you there, as the engine is damaged and I will never agree to walk there with you. He is here to haunt us."  he was still thinking of the ghoul. 

  Though to be truthful. Now I was also feeling very scared. After looking at that old man running as fast as the bus. I really can't make my mind accept that it was an illusion. My eyes were open, and I did have enough sense that will make me sure that I was not having a dream sitting awake. And now, our bus is stopped. I was just unable to stop questioning me that' is this place really haunted?'. But I never believed in ghouls and I don't think I will believe in them. So is it a jinn which is haunting us. But then why. My mind was just creeping me. I couldn't find out any solution for my thoughts, and even if I asked my cousins they would just say that I have started to believe like others. But I do feel like that we are attacked by the jinns. 

   



© 2013 Ridhwanul


Author's Note

Ridhwanul
IGNORE GRAMMAR(MY MAIN PROBLEM) and SPELLING(MY SECOND MAIN PROBLEM) and VOCAB(MY THIRD MAIN PROBLEM)
TENSE may be a big deal there.
Do give me a report.

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