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Forever

　

　

　

Why is it the more we know

the less, we

understand?

 

Why is it that you don’t know

that you are the light in my sky

and, the moon in my night,

the one that pulls the tide of oceans

from the deep, within my eyes.

 

Why is it the more we’re loved

the less we can

withstand?

 

It’s the heights that we’re brought to

that break us

in fall.

 

And yet you are the one,

with my blood,

do I scrawl.

 

I can’t take this anymore,

this chance of repose and perdition

to the valentine,

of our twain.

 

I can’t abide the storm

of whether, or not

the cast of fate;

the for, of got

of all that, can, remain.

 

Let me go

to flee my yore

and find,

the feel I lost.

 

Grant me safe

and cherish

upon, bridges I may cross.

 

Goodbye my love

I’m leaving now

so kiss me, one last time.

 

The only way I will

come back,

if you’re, forever mine.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

The flow in this poem is great the the choice of word kept my attention till the very last line. I love the last stanza. This poem says how I feel sometime and would like to tell the person that. Wonderful but it is sad that the person doesn't return the feelings.

[Bette]

beautiful!

[Rose]

Exquisit!
Beautifully writen. Nearly breaks my heart to think there are some men out there that want to be with their significant other for the rest of their lives!

Yours truly, Rose

[Stammers]

Noooo! You sucked me and then you left. I was half in love with you, phst, men.

No, seriously, this was amazing. There are lots of brilliant writers on this site, but not many that write about the things that I think are the most beautiful, although painful - you obviously do. For this reason, and because it was stunning, and masterfully written, you moved me.

'Why is it the more we’re loved
the less we can
withstand?'

[heido]

Are you leaving?