Beautiful, and so true! In a way it makes me sad that we 'are not' more -- that we could be so much more, and we could share so much more.
At least that is how your poem strikes me. I suspect everyone will interpret this their own way. I think we all have so much more potential, and your poem reminds me that we can be so much more!
I remember reading this sometime in the morning before school. Also, I remember making it one of my all-time favorite Rich poems EVER. It's just that beautiful. For me, it shall remain forever impossible to pick a favorite line. All of it is beautiful, well written, and amazing.
Give that to any girl and she'll be yours forever. ahaha.
You're all these things because we've yet
To make it all come true
Have you showed the object of your affection these words? I can't help thinking if you did then we might be reading a different kind of poem pretty soon :)
Oh how I love this!! Bringing her to life with words. What a masterpiece! I especially loved this line
"That dreams about an ending
That nobody dares to start"
Why we are so afraid to create sometimes, yet when one does dare, beautiful things can come. Superbly written and ryhmed. :)
Thank you so much everyone.
Oh and Constance, this (for me) wasn't about my muse (poetry).
it's about that special person we all know, who is our muse, and, our poetry.
Beautiful, and so true! In a way it makes me sad that we 'are not' more -- that we could be so much more, and we could share so much more.
At least that is how your poem strikes me. I suspect everyone will interpret this their own way. I think we all have so much more potential, and your poem reminds me that we can be so much more!
Excellent work - such a haunting ode to your work. Well done. Quite enjoyable and I can deeply empathize with the thoughts and emotions you have shone forth. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha
If you don't see me around that much be happy for me..
I scribble the most when I'm sad.
Thanks for helping me write less.
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