Party Like It's 1919

Party Like It's 1919

A Poem by Richard Lane

in the shadow of your spirits light 
i saw you with your hand 

reaching mine at
10:30 pm.

then it seemed my nervousness

at what might happen if i got caught drinking that 

last beautiful glass wine


so tonight let's dance like it's 1919

then we could do all of

partying beginning tonight

and continuing 

a few days 

before alcohol consumption is made illegal by

the strike of the midnight clock


and tonight I will surrender the music                     playing tonight and for once if not for every night


December 1, 2012

© 2013 Richard Lane


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"the strike of the midnight clock




and tonight I will surrender the music playing tonight and for once if not for every night"

A very good write...Thank you for sharing...:)........................

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"the strike of the midnight clock




and tonight I will surrender the music playing tonight and for once if not for every night"

A very good write...Thank you for sharing...:)........................

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice work and because I have seen your pictures of Baltimore and I am I guess quite familiar with your report style/ occasionally autobiographical/ diary style writing I felt that this was quiote fitting with your Richard Lane, brand of expression.

SEASONS GREETINGS

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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Richard Lane
Richard Lane

Baltimore, MD



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My name is Richard Lane and I am based in Baltimore, MD. I started writing poetry in 1984 during my High School years. My writing style varies, but my focus is prose writing and poetry. Please feel .. more..

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