When To Say Goodbye

if i were to enter your

mind would you feel you 

felt free if you were 

to see me maybe on

a day when there was

no massive storm

or pangs of doubt shattering

your ever worrying

mind about the right things

to say and when to say goodbye

without making your

self and the lover 

you thought you were seeing

for who they were

and somehow they took you 

as you were

even when the makeup you

wore began wearing off

by 9:00 pm

instead of midnight as the manual 

you were reading

on the subject of true love everlasting

last night

before the printed words erased with

setting of the full moon

less than one hour into halloween

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we all wear masks on halloween...and that is fine but otherwise we need to be just who we are...after the make-up comes off, what is underneath?

is it worth it? let's hope so.

i like this


i also like the beat of it because of how you separate the lines...kind of a hanging pause to the next word...as you split it up differently.

very very good work...

i shall visit more of your page...appreciate very much what i have read so far.

jacob

[SHEEMA HUQ]

and all in one breath....i like your subtle manor in this one