1977

1977

A Poem by Richard Lane

I am once again 
Hidden Away, 
listening to Minnie Riperton
singing her songs 
amongst other things,
in her genuinely beautiful
voice
even so, I continue writing about my dreams, while 
under
and I vibrate, 
with that energy,
and I combine my energy,
even as I try to eat better,
do as much walking outside mixed together, with
a healthy balance 
of red wine,
along with a heaping portion
of music,
mixed in, with my love of dancing,


14, October,  2001

© 2012 Richard Lane


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This was beautiful, even written not in the "now" but, I can see your whole personality in it, living fully, in denial, and in truth, with passion, yes passion, you should live as an bourgondic king in France, and drink red wine, and enjoy, life, not so much worry. Because, all happens in the moment, dear poet, and you're priceless.

E.L.

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I share your vision of a more sensitive Planet Earth. You are definitely part of the change through your writing one word at a time. Change will come through the voice of strong poet warriors like you! Great poem!

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The journal entry quality of this is very nice. It makes it more personal. It is though all these different but interconnected thoughts are rattling through your head of who you are and what you want and what you can do to make things better. Of course, the last two lines, I understand. May you always find liberation. Well done, my friend.

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This was beautiful, even written not in the "now" but, I can see your whole personality in it, living fully, in denial, and in truth, with passion, yes passion, you should live as an bourgondic king in France, and drink red wine, and enjoy, life, not so much worry. Because, all happens in the moment, dear poet, and you're priceless.

E.L.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Richard Lane
Richard Lane

Baltimore, MD



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My name is Richard Lane and I am based in Baltimore, MD. I started writing poetry in 1984 during my High School years. My writing style varies, but my focus is prose writing and poetry. Please feel .. more..

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