Japan's Beautiful Sun

Japan's Beautiful Sun

A Poem by Richard Lane

On Wednesday afternoon I was looking at the clouds with the sun in the background and I thought it would be an interesting twist to write about a character who could have been alive at anytime. The idea of developing the character of a Japanese soldier who lived and went through the same every day situation. I also purposely decided not to include a rant about World War Two because I would rather focus on things that are happening now and how my own actions might affect the world I am living in at the present time.

© 2012 Richard Lane


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It is a piece that...it really stirs thoughts. I don't think I can really describe the way it made me think because I am always a bit slow as of late. But there is no mistaking it is lovely in its own way and the words chosen are well pieced together.

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That would be an interesting topic...and a great twist could be incorporated in your piece for sure. Looking forward to the write. Good luck! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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from what i can assertain, this is a written process of decision making, about taking a definitive stance about your writing ambitions?

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Richard Lane

12 Years Ago

yes it is. but i am still going about my decisions with my writing. I see my writing as a way to rea.. read more
Richard Lane

12 Years Ago

i mean't to write i am still going about my decisions with humility in mind. i type too fast at time.. read more
SHEEMA HUQ

12 Years Ago

cool thank you
It is a piece that...it really stirs thoughts. I don't think I can really describe the way it made me think because I am always a bit slow as of late. But there is no mistaking it is lovely in its own way and the words chosen are well pieced together.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Richard Lane
Richard Lane

Baltimore, MD



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My name is Richard Lane and I am based in Baltimore, MD. I started writing poetry in 1984 during my High School years. My writing style varies, but my focus is prose writing and poetry. Please feel .. more..

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