She Sang like Pat Benatar

She Sang like Pat Benatar

A Poem by Richard Lane

i swear i could feel my heart melting all the way to floor 
as she played "hit me with your best shot" on the piano and 
when she started singing like pat benatar i didn't care 
how much my heart was aching,
because after all i was 18 and she was 19
and the feeling of my heart aching
mean't i was alive and no matter
how much alcohol was in me,
i knew the feelings i was feeling were as real as the chocolate cake i was 
eating and the only thought in my mind 
was how beautiful she looked that night twenty five years ago

© 2012 Richard Lane


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First, I have to say that I love "Rooms on Fire"! Heck, I love anything Stevie does...so forgive me that I got lost in the background music for a bit.
This is up close and personal, and I loved it from lead in notes all the way through. Private concerts are the best and youth and a drink or two don't hurt either. To think you still remember it all so clearly. Perhaps, she is still in your life.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard Lane

12 Years Ago

I am still amazed that I remember the memory of that event so clearly. Unfortunately I only saw and .. read more
Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

Funny how things can just come up at the strangest times. Thanks for the backstory. Perhaps somethi.. read more



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First, I have to say that I love "Rooms on Fire"! Heck, I love anything Stevie does...so forgive me that I got lost in the background music for a bit.
This is up close and personal, and I loved it from lead in notes all the way through. Private concerts are the best and youth and a drink or two don't hurt either. To think you still remember it all so clearly. Perhaps, she is still in your life.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard Lane

12 Years Ago

I am still amazed that I remember the memory of that event so clearly. Unfortunately I only saw and .. read more
Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

Funny how things can just come up at the strangest times. Thanks for the backstory. Perhaps somethi.. read more
a vivid and prosaic account, nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard Lane

12 Years Ago

Thank you Sheema. :-)

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Added on August 14, 2012
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Richard Lane
Richard Lane

Baltimore, MD



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My name is Richard Lane and I am based in Baltimore, MD. I started writing poetry in 1984 during my High School years. My writing style varies, but my focus is prose writing and poetry. Please feel .. more..

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