Passion Show

Passion Show

A Poem by Richard Lane
"

my version of a sonnet

"

studies show passion

can make for a good birthday gift,

because not all of us has the means

or reason for going on cruises just to see what

the rest of the living world looks

like and I always think it best to keep the thought

of my birthday and what I might

want or need to a minimum in case some other

events go on that I might not quite

be ready for and there is law saying I have to

a gift but into a box only to be

covered with wrapping paper,

when I could be thoughful enough to buy a gift

for the people I love and care for the most if I wanted to

and I do want to do such a thing

© 2012 Richard Lane


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Richard Lane
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Its always the thought that counts Richard.... some times just cooking for someone is a great gift and passion should always come through.... I like your thoughts :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The perfect balance here showed between spirituality and materialism.

I guess you know the perfect answer to fullfill the perfect human beings.

Loved the journey my friend.

E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Richard Lane
Richard Lane

Baltimore, MD



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My name is Richard Lane and I am based in Baltimore, MD. I started writing poetry in 1984 during my High School years. My writing style varies, but my focus is prose writing and poetry. Please feel .. more..

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