Previously Unpublished

Not quite sure why I never published it. Written sometime in 2015

I miss looking into your eyes
Crystal blue, bluer than the skies
I miss looking at your face
An image I can not erase
The days go by so slowly
My heart, consumed by you wholey
No amount of happiness
Can take away the sadness
Without you, I am useless

Reviews

[ZakLeonRamsey]

Aww. By the way, is this story true because the way you make this out, makes it seem like a reality and you are really good with describing things, as most poets are good. Short-lived, but I like it. This is a breakup story and this is short but good. Good job.

[Mariah Lynn Thompson]

Thank you :) I left it unpublished cause I wanted to make it longer but decided it was better as it was

[ZakLeonRamsey]

Okay. Well, now I know.

[Karen Redburn]

I want to argue with this poem, and remembered it is a feeling, thought, sentiment and as such it is excellent and perfectly clear!

[Mariah Lynn Thompson]

What's the argument?

[Karen Redburn]

While I was reading I thought no you are not consumed wholey and you are definitely not useless without this person. Time heals and those thoughts are fueled by emotion and will in time if allowed subside.

[Mariah Lynn Thompson]

This is an old poem from 2015

[Karen Redburn]

Ah and you have moved on from there.

[Mariah Lynn Thompson]

Oh yeah the dud I wrote that po3m about is old news
I might wrote something about why I fell out of love with him, or actually, how I found out my love for him was based on lies.

[Karen Redburn]

Write whatever you want, it is great to share and others will connect with it in so many ways. For me I just wanted to say that the poem had me arguing with myself and wanting to scream, no you are not useless! LOL

[Mariah Lynn Thompson]

Oh I understand now lol