Simpler Times

Simpler Times

A Poem by rhythm&blues

Remember when snowflakes were scented with baby's breath
street lights were dinner bells
riding bikes was a day's restitution of fresh air
there were no amber alerts or at least we were not aware
God was still politically correct at the start of a school day
Wonder bread was no wonder, but what did we care?
...Simpler places of the mind

© 2013 rhythm&blues


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This reminds me of a conversation that I had with a friend not too long ago...how life used to seem so big when we were small, and now it seems so much smaller now that we are big. Great imagery in this one, it really took me back to those special moments that I cherish in my mind.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

So kind of you to say, thank you so much Sarah.



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A wonderful piece of writing. I'll admit that it isn't over-the-top profound, but it is something I feel most humans think about—which makes is real.

Thank you for the post!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really enjoyed reading this, keep up the good work. c:


100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brilliant imagery! Obviously very deep and meaningful time

Posted 10 Years Ago


i sure do remember ... all that .. we were taught the things that matter ... your poem is a blessing to read and feel those good memories ... i love the whole thing .. but that first line is exquisite .. a little gold nugget!

E.


Posted 10 Years Ago


I hear you!
I love your thoughts here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sounds like you took us back in time with a fond memory at will:) I loved it:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ha! Very nice poem, a poem that makes the day is 'Simpler Times.'

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ah nostalgia ain't what it used to be. This is fresh and it sparkles like the memories you mention. Simply wonderful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yes absolutely true, we have become machines in the machine age............ those memories we cherish .... Ah

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is beautiful my friend. Like a breath of fresh air to fill our heart with nostalgia of days gone by.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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